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Lord Olaf

  • Other Re: A Response to the Bet

    I only wrote the list and a few sentences of my opinion, I apologize for not mentioning what the bet is, (i wrote it in a hurry) a giant mistake ...

    Feb 6, 2010
  • Other Re: A Response to the Bet

    The Bet is a inquiry of one of the largest bets of your life, depending on whether there is, or isnt a god. its stated as there IS or Isnt ...

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Suicide Note Of The Weak

    I am going to keep this short, i have only a few minutes to write. good writing, i would expand but the doownside..... what a debbie downer.

    Feb 2, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: quotes

    the only reason i posted them is because i needed to figure out how it works

    Feb 2, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: They (Waking Up Dead.)

    Other than grammatically i have no issue with my poem as it is about a condition that i actually have where my spine doesn't connect to my brain, it is ...

    Feb 2, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: They (Waking Up Dead.)

    This morning I woke up dead. I hear them around me, I can sense their presence. They think I'm asleep. They cant tell, They cant believe. I try to move, ...

    Feb 2, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Not Far From Home

    hey my names owen and i just wanted to point out a few flaws. 1.you said: SHE ate your toes if they stepped on her property. notice you said SHE, ...

    Mar 19, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Paradise

    dude this has some potential but how are you going to continue the story if hes blown to hell? Try to continue it a different way just check up on ...

    Mar 19, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Don't Hide.

    Don’t cover my ears Don’t shade my eyes. Why shouldn’t I hear What you have to hide? Why should I be sheltered? Why can’t I be exposed? Why do you ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Dirt: A Noir Story

    1. Taylor “Have you ever tasted dirt? Have you ever felt your heart stop, if only for a minute? Have you ever smelled the sweet odor of wet earth, and ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Dont Fear

    Don't be afraid my dear, i am here, Don't cry don't bleed, I swear it , Ill die! take heed , My warning, It only helps the dead , There ...

    Jan 9, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Blithe Bereavement - CH 1

    Slowly but surely, she was became “The Girl In The Attic” needs to be "slowly but surely she had become "the girl in the attic" LOrd olAF

    Jan 9, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: quotes

    Life is wasted on the living. Douglas Adams The art of living is more like wrestling than dancing. Marcus Aurelius Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday ...

    Jan 8, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Vulnerable

    that was a cool poem i liked the name to and the line we are subject to lifes diseases

    Jan 7, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Sister child

    *quote* a perfeCt start not perfet start had to point it out

    Jan 7, 2009


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— Elias Root Beadle